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Last edited by Black Thought on Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:06 pm, edited 9 times in total.
I owe everybody who gives me feedback one critique on a fiction work of their choice. Just give me a pm with a link and I'll critique whatever fiction piece you want.


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Last edited by Black Thought on Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:05 pm, edited 1 time in total.
I owe everybody who gives me feedback one critique on a fiction work of their choice. Just give me a pm with a link and I'll critique whatever fiction piece you want.


See my blog for more details




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Gender Male
Points 4141
Reviews 16
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Last edited by Black Thought on Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:05 pm, edited 1 time in total.
I owe everybody who gives me feedback one critique on a fiction work of their choice. Just give me a pm with a link and I'll critique whatever fiction piece you want.


See my blog for more details




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Gender Female
Points 3114
Reviews 15
For Part 3 how about III (Roman Numerals?
Or use a cool font!



I have lived through much, and now I think I have found what is needed for happiness. A quiet secluded life in the country, with the possibility of being useful to people to whom it is easy to do good... then rest, nature, books, music, love for one's neighbor - such is my idea of happiness.
— Leo Tolstoy