Professor Hosselhoff has been taken down

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pettybage
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Sat Jul 16, 2011 6:21 am
pettybage says... · Sat Jul 16, 2011 6:21 am
Yes, 'tis flash-fiction to be sent to some flash-zine, I figure
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Sun Jul 17, 2011 7:21 pm
hazellgreene says... · Sun Jul 17, 2011 7:21 pm
OMG.

What a cliffhanger to leave it on!!!! when I first started reading, I was like...ok, eccentric scientist, skeptical peasants, what could happen? I can't wait to see if you have any more! :)

Only one thing i noticed -

“If my calculation are correct, and they must be,” said the professor,


Did you mean to say calculations?

Other than that I loved it and I can't wait to see if you've got any more! :D
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Mon Jul 18, 2011 3:03 am
pettybage says... · Mon Jul 18, 2011 3:03 am
Dear Hazelgreen,
and thank you for the lovely reaction!
Alas, the ending isn't a cliffhanger, it's supposed to be a 'twist ending', like with the other professor Hosselhoff story. I had dreamed these two stories the other night and upon waking jotted them down immediately.
PM me when you need a review:)
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