Nancy Drew

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I'm not going to repeat what everyone has already said, but I do wish you'd add a little more detail. I can't really picture what's happening which is important; atleast to me. I love your idea and I do hope to read more. (:




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Gender Female
Points 890
Reviews 3
I'm not going to repeat what everyone else has already said. I think you should work on details and take into consideration what the other reviews say. I couldn't really picture what was going on which is always important but I think its a good start and I'd like to see it finished. (:



This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
— Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy