i did not understand a word you said.
well, most of it at least.
my brain hurts.
Old sketchbooks no longer devour
birthing landscapes, cloud notes or a resting cow. An anonymous girl drips autumn
along a bank, and two lovers will never kiss.
--i got this part. i liked this part. why?
1) because i understood you
2) because it has beautiful imagery.
um...it would be nice if your poems made sense to the common people. backstory, maybe, or am i asking for too much?
i liked the style of this poem - the odd, random linebreaks.
