An Ode to Me

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I like this poem. At first I was like "Who is this airhead?" lol. No offense. But as I read, I really liked it. It's pleasantly confusing--those kinds of poems where you have to really THINK about what the writer means. I like its format; the way I percieve it, the parts that are not in (these thingies, I shall call them for I can't spell that...) are what you... I don't know, saying to yourself to make you feel better, but the stanzas that ARE in the thingies are what you really think about yourself. I may be wrong, but I still enjoyed this poem. :)

Holly
eviscerate your fragile frame
spill it out in ragged form
a thousand different versions of yourself.




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I like the cerebral lands...



..and the ending is cute.

well...not cute...whatever. you get my point.
Is this bass REALLY strong enough?



There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside of you.
— Maya Angelou