Alone With The Sky

Yeah, I'll be another person to say don't stop, especially at 13. Anyways I was gonna say you have something here, just some unnecessary words. And I think Medusa's critique says it all. When you take out those words and read it the poem goes from ok, to very good. So, keep it up, because all poets rework their stuff, whether it's themselves, or someone like Medusa giving that editorial push.

If you stop writing poetry because you think you're not good enough...
I think I might shoot myself.

Okay, maybe I'm being a little dramatic.
But you're not gonna be amazing straightaway.
And you're already pretty darn close.

So...
Don't try to tell us that you suck
Because no one's gonna believe you.

And one more thing:
Don't tear yourself down before you even give us a chance to judge it for ourselves.
Okay?

Now I've gotta go read more....

Haha. Thanks everybody.

I guess I was just having a bit of a bad day...