I really like this, its sweet and makes me smile. The only thing I'd say other than the few things from what others said was instead of "anyways" at the end I would simply make it "anyway" I don't know but it would sound better I think. Overall I liked it.
Space: the final frontier. These are the voyages of the starship Enterprise. Its five-year mission: to explore strange new worlds, to seek out new life and new civilizations, to boldly go where no man has gone before. — Captain James T. Kirk
