"Girly." That's cute. The whole poem is so sweet. The one problem I see is that I don't think it has a definite rhyme scheme. Right now the rhyme scheme is all over the place. Work on that, and it will be pretty good.
Good luck with your writing!
~Jamie
"You can't always get what you want, but if you try sometimes you get what you need."
Dogs love their friends and bite their enemies, quite unlike people, who are incapable of pure love and always have to mix love and hate. — Sigmund Freud
