the fear

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free2bme
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Wed Aug 26, 2009 7:07 am
free2bme says... · Wed Aug 26, 2009 7:07 am
the fear
born on an idea
it whispers in your ear
the voice of fear
buried in the hearts of many
their minds fogged with secrets
a disease of their creation
a monster of destruction
it feeds on thoughts gone astray
beckoning on its prey
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qgadhia
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Fri Aug 28, 2009 11:10 am
qgadhia says... · Fri Aug 28, 2009 11:10 am
heyy there!!
i really liked the concept of this one! but i was kinda dissapointed when u ended it abruptly! would have really liked it more if there was more to it!!
The distance between love and hate [from a person]........depends not only upon fate......but on he who uses the opportune moment to make the difference....
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