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Verse 1:
I once walked in the darkness tired and all alone
I was lost, didn't know where to go
But You found me and You saved me and You brought me back to life
And now that I am here again You've restored me now
And my life is built on Your solid ground
Oh Jesus, My savior, You are my God
Chorus:
Because You never left me even when I did
Your love is so big
Through all these trials and struggles in life
You were by my side
And I know You’ll be with me until the end
You’re my greatest friend
Verse 2:
Everyday is a battle, but the victory is Yours
And God I pray that You would lead me towards
Your Son, perfect one, and make me into His image
Oh God I want to be the servant at Your feet
Bowing before Your majesty, ready to complete
All the plans that You have for me
Chorus:
Because You never left me even when I did
Your love is so big
Through all these trials and struggles in life
You were by my side
And I know You’ll be with me until the end
You’re my greatest friend
Bridge:
In every moment, in every season
You were there
Jesus You’re greater, than any other
I am Yours forever (repeat)
Chorus:
Because You never left me even when I did
Your love is so big
Through all these trials and struggles in life
You were by my side
And I know You’ll be with me until the end
You’re my greatest friend
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Hey Windsailor.I thought the song was amazing. It was very true and touching. I would love singing this song.
It was beautifully written and a joy to read.
It encouraged me and lifted me up. I really needed that today
Thank you.
I hope you continue writing songs that glorify God.
Keep up the good work!
Thanks!
Hey there, Windsailor!
I thought this song was really good. The way you grouped the stanzas gave the entire song a flow.
There are no spelling or grammatical errors, and the chorus stayed the same throughout the song.
I'd say a 9/10. Good work, and keep writing!
(For some reason I imagined this song being sung to the tune of "Cornerstone".
~Swiftfur