Published May 30, 2012
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Very vivid, I like this a lot. I could imagine everything. I love how you made it rhyme too.
I'd be hoping to keep on sleeping,
for when I do awake from slumber,
I'd remember that we were never together,
that in fact, would be my utmost reaping.
That was my favorite, very deep and i could feel the emotion.
keep it up. A lot of potential.
Very vivid, I like this alot.
this is really good and I enjoyed it. I liked the rhyme and the way it flowed. Good job