Published March 8, 2012
life is simple
with spikes of complications
the ones that turn your world upside down;
the simplicity that is your life
becomes tumultuous
and you tend to lose track;
forgetting what it used to be
the simplicity that was your life
the placidness of your causes
is lost in the abyss
of the nominal complications, as they were;
keeps you going along the path you choose
however complicated it might be
the dance of two poles
merging together, as they were
the flow - the simplicity you choose to live.
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