Published April 30, 2009
It's only the chorus.
Original:
You lift my feet off the ground
you spin me around
you make me crazier, crazier
Feels like i’m falling And i
Lost in your eyes
you make me crazier, crazier, crazier
Re-mix (From a slave/hungry person's perspective):
You make me eat off the ground
For days at a time
You make me hungrier, hungrier
Feels like I'm starving and I
I'm done with starving
You make me hungrier, hungrier, hungrier
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