Published February 10, 2007
I have a locket,
with your lips inside...
'nothing has meaning,
I've tried and tried
to find
what is not there."
but there are colorbirds
in your eyes.
and you've got diamonds
for fingernails...
honey, willow,
darling of the sea,
make me
what I want to be.
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