Published September 14, 2008
Forever's bottle
I've got forever in a bottle, and it's hidden in my heart
Though my heart will stop beating, forever can only start
My heart is forever's bottle, for one day it will break
But for now it holds forever, with all the time that it can take
Forever is my love
But i won't last forever
So read the words above
And remember us together
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