Across Worlds

Across Worlds

A club for those who follow my novel

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    Noelle · Apr 23, 2015
    Hi guys! So, I'm here to ask for your advice once again. I mine as well pick your brains one more time :3 (not figuratively of course... ew)

    I'm starting to really think about how I'm going to end this novel and I think I have it figured out. What I want to know from you guys is what do you hope to see resolved by the end of this novel? I'm going to be writing at least a sequel to this so keep that in mind. Just wanted to get some opinions :) Thank you so much!

    Noelle replied · Apr 23, 2015

    *(not literally of course) ...thought I wrote that wrong. Guess the joke doesn't work now xD


    Alchemist replied · Apr 23, 2015

    If real Zeke isn't a real baddas strong guy comming in pew pewing bad guys, I'd be quite disappointed for realz. (I'm reading your work whenever it's out Noelly, I just really have 0 time to review) I'm not sure if you are setting up for George to backstab Rhyhs but I'd rather prefer him staying bad. Also, somehow I feel like you've made Rhys too powerful for any of your characters to manage, so I don't know how can you deal with him. Also one thing you can work on harder is manifestations of these powers. I feel Rhys is powerful rather from what you said than from what you have shown to us in fights and stuff. Ehh, if you want anything more specific, please ask!



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