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this is one of my favorite parts... =) hope you like it too. Chapter 6-My butt gets kicked, an d no…Mon Aug 09, 2010 11:49 pm -
Hey Everyone! I've finally decided to post something again, and although it isn't a continuation of…Mon Aug 09, 2010 7:28 pm -
Chapter 1 The Dream and Dreamers(Note: not all the character's thoughts are in itallics it would ha…Mon Aug 09, 2010 6:43 pm -
more explaining... x.x and i do need to change a couple of things, but im not sure how to yet, so i…Mon Aug 09, 2010 2:35 pm -
* Nothing magical so far, but that's to come, I found this, and it's at least a couple of years old…Mon Aug 09, 2010 11:36 am -
I added the introduction because that's how the beginning of my book is right now. Unfortunately I …Mon Aug 09, 2010 12:42 am -
I glanced up as the door opened, and had to restrain myself from rolling my eyes. Not them- a few o…Sun Aug 08, 2010 7:29 pm -
Hey everyone this is my first ever attempt at fantasy, so tell me what you think. **************** …Sun Aug 08, 2010 6:28 pm -
“Soldiers,” Mistress Ebony addressed her recruits, all standing in a straight line in front of her,…Sun Aug 08, 2010 5:45 pm -
I'd be glad to return any reviews on this~. ^_^ This is my NaNoWriMo project from 2009, which, as o…Sat Aug 07, 2010 4:54 pm -
Part one of my ebtery of Jdawns contest, hope you like: Connor She looked ill again, her eyes usual…Sat Aug 07, 2010 9:56 am -
This is my most recent work, apart from my current novel, which I am not willing to post. It is set…Fri Aug 06, 2010 8:58 pm -
Okay, this is the third chapter of my novel which I have decided to rename by borrowing the title o…Fri Aug 06, 2010 6:04 pm -
* This is something me and my friend thought, so I took the liberty to write about. So I hope you e…Fri Aug 06, 2010 10:30 am -
this is my edited chapters 1 and 2, plus i added a prologue... hope its better than the last one i …Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:45 am -
Okay, so... this is the prologue to my new novel. I sorta wrote it when I was half-asleep, which wa…Thu Aug 05, 2010 8:28 pm -
The sun shone brightly into the room of Keitaro Namikaze. His day started off as it normally did: "…Thu Aug 05, 2010 6:51 pm -
The following morning broke clear with silver sunlight gazing down into the pale blue skies. Gattli…Thu Aug 05, 2010 6:48 pm -
Here's the second half of the first chapter; hopefully a lot more is explained here that'll make it…Thu Aug 05, 2010 12:00 pm -
OK, I know I've changed the first two chapters multiple times, but I just haven't been satisfied wi…Thu Aug 05, 2010 8:04 am -
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I will return reviews for this. Unity Chapter One: On The Train As Vera Noble stepped onto the trai…Wed Aug 04, 2010 6:34 am -
Chapter One Why does it always seem like the world is out to get you? And when you ask someone what…Tue Aug 03, 2010 8:31 pm -
Chapter One Against the blackness flickered a single flame into existence. The only light to challe…Mon Aug 02, 2010 6:18 pm -
This is now the 4th draft on the first chapter of my novel based on the helpful tips and critisms s…Mon Aug 02, 2010 3:25 pm -
Chapter 1. I wish it was all a dream. Sometimes, I wish I could just open up my eyes and it would a…Mon Aug 02, 2010 3:14 pm -
Hey guys, I really haven't written anything in a while, and this just sorta came to me ya know? SO!…Mon Aug 02, 2010 2:06 pm -
Sorry again for the delay on this everyone. This chapter isn't too exciting, but the next one shall…Sun Aug 01, 2010 5:32 pm -
I stepped down from the train with my eudaemon, Quentin, and surveyed the bustling city that was In…Sun Aug 01, 2010 5:08 pm -
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taken everyones advice and added stuff, changed stuff, described more etc. So before starting on ch…Sun Aug 01, 2010 12:22 am -
The Finisher crossed the through a charred forest of twisted trees beneath a dark red sky which was…Sat Jul 31, 2010 10:35 pm -
Most of the invitees were blissfully unaware of the scandal taking place at the wedding. Not bother…Sat Jul 31, 2010 8:38 am -
Hey everyone! Here is chapter 9, I hope you like it! I wasn't sure what to rate it, so I just rated…Fri Jul 30, 2010 7:06 pm -
This is a story I'm working on, and I'm still tinkering with it; any suggestions or criticisms are …Fri Jul 30, 2010 12:24 pm -
Chapter One Ember wiped the sweat away from her brow, glancing up at the burning Arizona sun above …Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:32 pm -
Hey everyone! This is chapter 8! I hope you enjoy it! Chapter 9 will be up soon also!(: Chapter 8, …Thu Jul 29, 2010 10:54 pm -
After we made sure I wasn’t wet --- or in Quentin’s words --- wasn’t melting anymore, we went downs…Thu Jul 29, 2010 12:14 pm -
Please review! (I should have a lot of telling, not showing... I'm still trying to get the hand of …Thu Jul 29, 2010 8:56 am -
And he was dead. His body lay face up in the mud, his eyes wide, and his legs splayed. He looked su…Wed Jul 28, 2010 7:02 pm -
In the house, the hours dragged on, morning into midday, and hunger began to tear at Jonalla’s stom…Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:22 pm -
Three days later, I had made it out of the Omosede Forest. A wide expanse of lush grasslands now la…Wed Jul 28, 2010 4:37 pm -
What Happened The Beginning of Silivrenniel "Gwen, you there ?" I head voice all around me while my…Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:42 pm -
Hey Readers! Here is Chapter 7, I hope you enjoy it! This one isn't as long as my previous chapters…Tue Jul 27, 2010 4:56 pm -
Chapter 1 Legend: "abyss": Aure's equivalent of "hell" "heartbeat": Aure's equivalent of a second. …Tue Jul 27, 2010 3:17 pm -
Chapter 4: Don't Let Me Stop You Emily Rose I grab my hair, again, as I look around in the darkness…Tue Jul 27, 2010 12:06 pm
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I seek constructive criticism. Be harsh, please! I frankly have no idea what's in my readers' mind …Tue Jul 27, 2010 9:51 am -
|Note| At this point, I feel I need to make major changes to previous chapters, going as far as to …Tue Jul 27, 2010 5:34 am -
|Note| At this point, I feel I need to make major changes to previous chapters, going as far as to …Tue Jul 27, 2010 5:14 am -
I walked behind Alora. She was doing a lot better considering. Her arm was out of commission but he…Tue Jul 27, 2010 4:51 am
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