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My eyes burst open, the light searing them. Sarah is next to me on the opaque hospital seats. There…Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:26 pm -
While I was at school, I silently prayed that my mind would be spared another painful migraine, and…Thu Mar 18, 2010 1:27 am -
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Hello Burk “Stupid- freaking- wall.” Mia kicked at the plain gray wall in front of her. The impact …Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:15 pm -
Locked The Locust King - Chapter 1Hey guys. I've removed this and I'm getting it locked so I can take all your suggestions into accou…Wed Mar 10, 2010 4:49 am -
Part one of Chapter 10. Chapter 10: The Battle of Hawys. Ducis Das. The troops had been searching f…Sun Mar 07, 2010 2:22 am -
Part Two of Chapter 10. Chapter 10: The Battle of Hawys. Rex Jic. Aboard the lead transport the cre…Sat Mar 06, 2010 5:02 pm -
It was dusk; the sun was almost completely under the horizon. Out in the forest, near to the strang…Sat Mar 06, 2010 1:03 am -
This is related to the shorts I've been writing lately. It is how I would really make it out if it …Tue Mar 02, 2010 5:09 am -
Chapter One - A Hole in the World By: S. N. Deane Time flows through the clock; creeping into my mi…Sun Feb 28, 2010 6:04 pm -
I'm in high school and I've been trying to write my own novel. Here's what I have written so far.. …Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:53 pm -
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Chapter 1 The blinding sun shone through my window, casting a bright light on my face. I squinted, …Tue Feb 16, 2010 1:47 pm -
I'm in high school and I've been trying to write my own novel. Here's what I have written so far.. …Fri Feb 12, 2010 7:00 pm -
Ok a few notes, put this on fantasy board ages ago but yeah stupid to do as it isn't even fantasy. …Fri Feb 12, 2010 5:45 pm -
Twelve years later Karla knew that she was surrounded by idiots, and had been for twelve years. She…Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:38 am -
The alien paused, and his face turned in an expression of disgust. He began to wipe his boots off o…Fri Feb 05, 2010 8:54 pm -
Here it is, my favorite chapter so far. Kari got up off the floor stiffly. Seconds ago, she would h…Fri Feb 05, 2010 6:35 am -
By far, chapter 4 is my favorite, so you guys just keep plowing on through this junk. :lol: "Is it …Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:11 pm -
In this Chapter, the 5 priests and the Decton leave their planet and go to meet the D'scites at the…Thu Feb 04, 2010 5:28 pm -
So here's the second chapter, but it's somewhat rough. Here are links to the prologue and first cha…Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:22 pm -
Edited! Violet was one of the finest planets in the three systems; resources under the fertile grou…Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:09 pm -
Anya and Jet try to escape the Headmistress and her guards.Wed Feb 03, 2010 8:29 am -
Thanks for the comments! They were certainly really helpfull, i really appreciate it. :) This is a …Mon Feb 01, 2010 5:14 am
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Chapter 3 I felt someone jab me in the stomach, and I opened my eyes, only to see Angela. A worried…Sat Jan 30, 2010 10:36 pm
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Locked 27 - Chapter OneDeleted post. I accidentally posted the same piece of work twice.Tue Jan 26, 2010 11:22 pm -
Four hours later. A blizzard had blown up so we had to walk to the rendezvous point. We couldn’t se…Mon Jan 25, 2010 12:32 am -
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*Prologue* Lauren Travolt stared down at the can of ravioli. Her children didn’t know it was the la…Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:46 am -
Chapter Three Mrs. Smith walked past me without saying anything. Her expression was severely grim. …Tue Jan 19, 2010 4:10 am -
The Antigone hung in the atmosphere of the gas giant. Its long boxy form loomed between the purple …Tue Jan 05, 2010 1:36 am -
Chapter 1 They’re getting closer. They’re gaining on me, and fast. This is the third and probably t…Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:45 pm -
Hi guys it's me PenNPaper, this is another part of my story, titled Saving Zanica. Hope you guys en…Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:40 pm -
This is kind of a baby of mine, although I'm not really too far into it. Please rip it apart though…Mon Jan 04, 2010 10:53 am -
Ok here is part four…again. I reworked it for a lower age rating, so any younger readers can still …Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:04 pm -
I'm a Junior in High School and I've been trying to write my own novel since I was in 8th grade. I …Sat Jan 02, 2010 2:24 am -
Chapter 2 As soon as I left the house, I took off running. Tears blinded my vision, but I kept on g…Tue Dec 29, 2009 4:14 am
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Based on the feedback that I have recieved so far I have decided to edit it a little. Thanks Shauni…Mon Dec 28, 2009 4:46 pm -
Sorry things have become immeasurably complicated in my life. I am not even going to estimate when …Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:23 am -
Ok here is chapter two. Getting to the action parts soon. I have a rough Idea of some names but hav…Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:18 am -
Emaizi Bacar drew open heavy emerald drapes to let the sunshine pour into her office. She smiled, a…Sun Dec 27, 2009 6:11 pm -
Hey Everyone, I'm Suzu and I'm posting an edited version of this chapter. Please tell me your thoug…Fri Dec 25, 2009 5:47 pm -
This is Chapter One of World Apart. Critiques are welcome!! This is my first serious novel. Please …Fri Dec 25, 2009 3:39 pm -
Chapter 8: A Change of Scenery. Chief Glyuray Harvester Teryl Anker. The large tanker headed toward…Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:44 pm -
This Chapter is seen through the eyes of the failed Braxton rebellion leader. Chapter 7: For the Gr…Tue Dec 15, 2009 3:39 pm -
Ok here is part four. The next part of Dragon Market will be up tomorrow and Shadow Flight will be …Mon Dec 14, 2009 3:57 am -
Yes it is a prologue. I am going to finish up Dragon Marked and Shadow Flight for after the weekend…Fri Dec 11, 2009 3:51 am -
I had some spare time so thought I would quickly type up chapter one I don’t think it is as good as…Fri Dec 11, 2009 3:38 am -
Hey everyone. This is just the very first little part to my book. It's extremely small, but I would…Wed Dec 09, 2009 3:09 am
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