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It was late afternoon, and the department store was busy. It was the perfect time to shoplift. No o…Tue Aug 31, 2010 5:24 pm -
JoJo ran across the hallway to the girls' washroom. It wasn't exactly the cleanest bathroom in the …Tue Aug 31, 2010 9:59 am -
Perverts, protests and how to become a Pokemon masterMon Aug 30, 2010 11:15 pm -
Author's Note: I forgot to mention it in the first chapter, but this is the first draft. Critiquing…Mon Aug 30, 2010 6:41 pm -
“Emily, dinner’s nearly ready,” Dad calls up the stairwell. I push myself away from my desk and clo…Mon Aug 30, 2010 3:15 pm
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This is old....don't review it unless you really want to. Edited version can be found here: http://…Sun Aug 29, 2010 10:33 pm -
It had gotten to a point where all the daily things that everyone did confused me. It got to a poin…Sun Aug 29, 2010 7:16 pm -
He looked at the sea, his eyes lifeless, and thought about his story. His story... it was too painf…Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:22 am -
Once upon a time, there was a bunny rabbit. His name was Floppy Ears. He was white and extra cuddly…Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:21 am -
Alex Carter Chapter 1 I can remember so clearly. I can hear her laugh, I can feel her heartbeat. I …Sat Aug 28, 2010 12:04 pm -
1 I stepped into the store and looked around. It bled normal. Mothers hurried their children along,…Fri Aug 27, 2010 1:57 pm -
She can feel the words beneath her skin and like an animal, she lets them ravage her from the insid…Thu Aug 26, 2010 7:21 pm -
(This is the first time I've tried writing in first person since I was around eight years old What …Wed Aug 25, 2010 7:37 pm -
Day 1, 9:36pm About three hours later, after my team had set up multiple cameras in the living room…Wed Aug 25, 2010 9:47 am -
Chapter 1 I can remember so clearly. I can hear her laugh, I can feel her heartbeat. I remember her…Tue Aug 24, 2010 11:16 pm -
5 I wake up on Sunday morning to my mother gone, probably out work, or out with couple of friends. …Sun Aug 22, 2010 6:21 pm -
Hello, this is the second chapter of my story ^^ Please critique honestly :) Word count: 1264 Chapt…Fri Aug 20, 2010 7:33 pm
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Prologue: After you die, I suppose, you are eventually forgotten. In the beginning of being forgott…Fri Aug 20, 2010 1:40 am -
CHAPTER ONE I sit here, perfectly still, quietly sitting up against the headboard. I sat there in t…Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:55 pm -
Before you ask, no there is no Case Files #1-4. The X’s Residence Case #5 Date: 5-10-04 Day 1, 12:0…Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:45 pm -
Prologue: It has been two days since I stepped outside my home. After I watched the last of the met…Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:53 am -
ch.1 I was washing the dishes when I saw his headlights looming into view, pulling into the drivewa…Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:54 am -
“Chloe, get down here, now!” Mom cries from the stairwell, less than an hour after our heated words…Tue Aug 17, 2010 10:47 pm
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(A/N-For anyone who is following, I changed her name from Hanna to Emily) 4 I prefer being left alo…Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:53 pm -
3 I’m not exactly sure how I ended up here. I’m standing beside my father, wearing my fanciest dres…Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:24 pm -
2 I love my bedroom for a reason. It’s at the top of the house and I can ignore everything else in …Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:19 pm -
1 It’s amazing what girls will do to be perfect. Even as a daydream. It was during lunch, and Lisa,…Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:00 pm -
I am running around like an idiot yelling Jacob’s name. So far I checked the bakery, all of the aba…Mon Aug 16, 2010 10:21 pm -
“Jerry… how do you think she’s coping with the… situation?” Mom’s voice floats up the stairwell. I …Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:57 pm
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Very interesting, although a little long. The third chapter in a series I hope will someday become …Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:56 pm -
This is a draft. I need suggestions on the following if possible: - Realism. Is this possible? - Ca…Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:53 pm -
Locked Over ItIt had gotten to a point where all the daily things that everyone did confused me. It got to a poin…Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:04 pm -
2. As they exited the classroom and headed against the current, they both were silent. Without a do…Mon Aug 16, 2010 2:48 am -
Dear Daddy and Mom, As I looked around , I noticed a look of despair on a boy's face. I walked up t…Mon Aug 16, 2010 12:03 am -
Layla had always been loved. Though she never married, never even got into a relationship, she had …Sun Aug 15, 2010 11:38 pm -
It seemed like now everything in my life was a lie, it was all wrong. Jane was forgotten, she was m…Sun Aug 15, 2010 8:28 pm -
Chapter One “One second, mother!” “Come on! We’ve been waiting for an hour. Your grandparents are w…Sun Aug 15, 2010 7:30 pm
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[0.00] I hear a door open but I can’t see it. The puppet strings of this body are cut and I can’t f…Sun Aug 15, 2010 6:57 pm
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1. Strangely so, the weather wasn’t constantly changing anymore. It was winter, and everything abou…Sun Aug 15, 2010 3:32 pm -
Two hours later, we are free from prison school. After letting myself into the house, I lock myself…Sun Aug 15, 2010 2:53 pm
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Please Note: This story takes place in the mid 1800 century, in Brazil. Margret Minchin leaped with…Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:16 am -
There were no real grammatical corrections to make to Chapter 2, so I'm posting Chapter 3 in hopes …Sun Aug 15, 2010 7:13 am -
This is a draft. I need suggestions on the following if possible: - Realism. Is this possible? - Ca…Sat Aug 14, 2010 10:31 pm -
A very small part of a new book I am writing. And I'm mostly concerned if you like my style of writ…Sat Aug 14, 2010 10:06 am -
“How are you feeling, Chloe?” The red-haired woman sitting in from of me asks, folding her hands ov…Sat Aug 14, 2010 5:35 am
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There is a man with purple lips watching the fourth stall. I notice because the two women who accom…Sat Aug 14, 2010 5:24 am -
Chapter 2 Burial Re-Dug That stupid cat was already past age expectancy, and that little girl, oh I…Fri Aug 13, 2010 10:09 pm -
Author's Note: This chapter is in the point of view of alot of people. I tried my best to make it v…Fri Aug 13, 2010 7:22 am -
The Séance Revival is another attempt at a series of seven short stories that I wrote a while ago. …Fri Aug 13, 2010 4:52 am -
I AM PULLING THIS NOVEL DOWN FROM THE SITEFri Aug 13, 2010 3:20 am
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