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Most people don't believe me when I say I have six sisters. Most people also don't believe me when …Mon Jan 04, 2010 10:47 pm -
“Here,” the man said hanging his small metal crucifix over her neck. “You need this more than I do.…Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:57 pm -
Child’s Play Part Two Point Five (another transition piece) *It has come to my attention that Child…Mon Jan 04, 2010 5:10 am -
Child’s Play: Part Two Rated a loose R for “thematic” elements (I’ll star the passage so you can sk…Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:42 am -
Chapter Two We got to my house first, huffing and puffing, I slid off of Pheonix’ shoulders and tur…Sun Jan 03, 2010 9:51 pm -
This is only the first section of the first chapter -- I favour longer chapters -- but there was a …Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:52 pm -
It’s been seven months since the woman who birthed me crumbled my family’s foundation, destroyed my…Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:56 pm -
Well, this is my first posting on YWS. The summary for this story is pretty long, so I shouldn't wa…Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:46 pm -
This is the first chapter of Finding Olive, what I want to see as far as reviews is grammatical mis…Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:43 pm -
Hello, here is the comedy project that I'm working on. After taking into account of what the review…Sun Jan 03, 2010 8:17 am -
Alright. This is the first three sections of a story I started to write a while ago... I really lik…Sun Jan 03, 2010 3:44 am -
2 ~ Whynn ~ FOOSH!!! I fall backwards and a pain in my stomach grows. I look up at my friends and a…Sat Jan 02, 2010 10:38 pm -
Ok sorry for the delay my computer broke same as usual, all comments and tips very welcome and I ho…Thu Dec 31, 2009 11:16 pm -
The second and hopefully better part of Shadow Flight: Un-retirement. All tips and comments welcome…Thu Dec 31, 2009 4:42 pm -
Hi guys this is my first work posted online. Due to fear of mistakes (Due to reasons I would like t…Thu Dec 31, 2009 4:13 pm -
Starting this again. It's just a excerpt, tell me if it's good enough to continue. Thanks, enjoy. -…Wed Dec 30, 2009 10:39 am -
Hi, this is a prologue to a novel I plan to write when I'm done editing my last one. Would love to …Tue Dec 29, 2009 5:35 am -
Chapter Three Night came faster than I expected, it seemed like one minute the sun was out and the …Mon Dec 28, 2009 11:40 am -
Memoirs of Ali Chapter Seven Three days later I stood hidden in the grass by the porch, my heart po…Mon Dec 28, 2009 3:58 am -
Memoirs of Ali Chapter One “Of all the hidden worlds – none so hidden as ours.” I would often repea…Mon Dec 28, 2009 2:45 am -
Chapter One The school bell interrupted my history teacher’s lesson on the Neolithic Revolution, an…Sun Dec 27, 2009 7:36 am -
I am so sorry it took me so long to write this chapter. I was busy with homework that i haven't eve…Sun Dec 27, 2009 4:22 am -
Thanks for the critiques from before. I appreciate them. I swear it isn't as cliche as it sounds. ~…Sun Dec 27, 2009 12:38 am -
Chapter three for Kiss of FateSat Dec 26, 2009 6:05 am -
Make sure you read the Prologue first, or else none of this will make much since when it comes to w…Sat Dec 26, 2009 2:51 am
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A century come and gone and I am but a witness. In it I leave children to shape tomorrow. Today I a…Fri Dec 25, 2009 6:14 am -
I editted my first three chapters, and wrote more to it. I hope you guys like it! :D I need a lot o…Fri Dec 25, 2009 3:07 am -
Part One The unfortunate mark of true artistic genius, I think, is that many only achieve worldwide…Fri Dec 25, 2009 12:15 am -
Forever(part 2) By:Layla guys i totally hate this piece and was on the phone while writing this. so…Fri Dec 25, 2009 12:13 am -
Okay, I hope this isn't too cliche, it may seem like that in the beginning but all I can say it's n…Wed Dec 23, 2009 1:16 am -
Memoirs of Ali Chapter Six That night I was unsure if I was dreading the dawn or looking forward to…Tue Dec 22, 2009 9:18 am -
3. Flying [Over the Atlantic] It felt amazing. Flying without a parachute. Free-diving. Spiralling.…Mon Dec 21, 2009 10:11 pm -
Erasing people from existence is a difficult task. It consumed enough energy that I may be able to …Mon Dec 21, 2009 11:23 am -
Chapter two! Any feedback is greatly appreciated. :D Chapter Two The next day, Saturday, I sat alon…Mon Dec 21, 2009 5:19 am -
"Liz! Hurry up! You can check your email when you get home! I heard the bus!" My mom yelled from do…Sun Dec 20, 2009 4:13 am -
Reeve stood outside the operating room as the doctors moved around the table. Finally one broke off…Sun Dec 20, 2009 3:09 am -
4. Because Roses are Red, and Violets are Blue: Part 1 [Texas] It was the first day of the semester…Sat Dec 19, 2009 1:33 pm
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Every man supposes himself not to be fully understood or appreciated. ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson ~ ~ ~ H…Sat Dec 19, 2009 1:03 pm -
“What’s going on out here?” yelled someone almost at the corner. Nerezza waggled her fingers in far…Sat Dec 19, 2009 8:50 am -
Chapter One “You can’t keep staying out until all hours of the morning, Edgar! What example are you…Sat Dec 19, 2009 12:25 am -
World War IV breaks out then. (World War III was when I was told that we had to leave our nice hous…Fri Dec 18, 2009 4:55 am -
“Olivia.” His voice cracked like a whip and Olivia flinched at its sternness. So much for avoiding …Wed Dec 16, 2009 12:19 am -
Olivia entered the Great Hall at the announcer’s call and stopped at the head of the stairs. Pausin…Tue Dec 15, 2009 9:29 pm
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The sun sank low over the small clearing changing shadows into devilish creatures lurking behind th…Tue Dec 15, 2009 2:15 am
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I'm new here. New member new meat. You can slap it around but please don't chop. Prologue “Good mor…Mon Dec 14, 2009 11:36 pm -
I turned running flat out. I felt faster, more alert; my eyes scanned everything more intensely now…Mon Dec 14, 2009 8:36 pm -
My feet lagged as I stumbled down the dark wooden stairs after I was called for dinner. I’m dreadin…Mon Dec 14, 2009 1:14 am -
After dinner was over, it was already started to get dark. Instead of staying and just writing in m…Sun Dec 13, 2009 9:53 pm -
*This story is a very rough draft...and it was influence by divine comedy...please comments are nee…Sun Dec 13, 2009 9:18 am -
“That’s a gold card! How did you get that?” she was astounded by something I didn’t understand. “Al…Sun Dec 13, 2009 12:26 am
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