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I'm trying to work on the atmosphere of the story. Oh and the way I wrote the dialogue is just an e…Thu May 06, 2010 4:26 am -
In the city of Athens, the Parthenon stood as the temple to Athena, the virgin goddess of wisdom an…Wed May 05, 2010 11:13 pm -
23. Gymnasium Nazi Daniel strolled into the gym not exactly looking forward to playing basketball a…Wed May 05, 2010 11:09 pm -
as political landscapes dissolve The Brazilian raises his left hand from the stock of his rifle to …Wed May 05, 2010 8:59 pm -
This is just a quickie, and I wanted some of your thoughts on it. :) *** My footsteps resounded alo…Wed May 05, 2010 10:32 am -
Part 1 : http://www.writerfeed.com/topic62837.html Cindy kept running her mouth and it was starting…Tue May 04, 2010 11:16 pm -
Finns phone always seems to ring louder than usual hen it rang at an incontinent time. She was fina…Tue May 04, 2010 11:09 pm -
The level of perfection he attained ought to be blasphemous. That way, she could strip his immortal…Tue May 04, 2010 9:17 pm -
Giving the wrench one last good turn to the right the pipe came lose and fell to the bottom of the …Tue May 04, 2010 6:50 pm -
Marina The sea was cold, ice cold, and even in my other form it hurt me to the bone. For I was stil…Tue May 04, 2010 3:32 pm -
The alarm turned on and began ringing. The small room was illuminated with light, and Fred Pastor c…Tue May 04, 2010 10:49 am -
I first checked out A Moment when I was nineteen. My college English teacher, convinced that colleg…Tue May 04, 2010 9:32 am -
It's been soo long; I can't even keep track anymore. So tired, so very tired . The wires are starti…Tue May 04, 2010 12:19 am -
I couldn’t tell you when it happened. Maybe it was when my parents decided they where going to “tak…Tue May 04, 2010 12:01 am -
Warning: It's not as suspenseful or thrilling, but it has some content that should not be read by y…Mon May 03, 2010 10:20 pm -
There’s a crowd of mannequins clambering over my bed. Their faces grotesque, blood gushing from the…Mon May 03, 2010 10:09 pm -
Part of a project I'm working on; simple, four page, fast stories of murderers. I plan to keep doin…Mon May 03, 2010 7:55 pm -
TITAN The sand crunches underneath my baked feet; I am a Titan, the only one left. The waves are la…Mon May 03, 2010 4:41 pm
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I got this idea from a plot generator thing on this website (http://ywp.nanowrimo.org/) Suggestions…Mon May 03, 2010 7:51 am -
Okay, so I'm working on my characterization. I did this for a character camp on another site and I …Mon May 03, 2010 7:21 am -
This isn't really a short story, it's an intro to a much longer one, i just wanted some feedback. Y…Mon May 03, 2010 1:07 am -
____________________________________________________________________________________ Very long ago,…Sun May 02, 2010 7:49 pm -
My mama, she was famous. I don’t know this ’cos I met her or anything. I mean, I didn’t know her. P…Sun May 02, 2010 5:55 pm -
ANY feedback will be appreciated. Even if all you have to say is "I stopped reading after the 1st s…Sun May 02, 2010 3:26 pm -
A flannel olive-green shirt with three yellow stitches over the heart and a single black rose sit u…Sun May 02, 2010 7:46 am -
"Kadence, where's Kiyl?" "How would I know? you're his dad f'chrissakes," "Don't play that card aga…Sun May 02, 2010 7:23 am -
Running like the wind toward my lake away from my discoverer. Knowing I wouldn’t be able to make it…Sun May 02, 2010 7:12 am -
Hey everyone. This is pure experimentation; I haven't done anything like this before. Tell me what …Sun May 02, 2010 12:27 am -
This is a follow-up to the first short write I wrote (Sydney) Enjoy! I can’t do this. I mean, I can…Sat May 01, 2010 11:51 pm -
Alright, Syd , I think, Just pee. It’s easy. And it’ll be negative . I sit on the closed toilet sea…Sat May 01, 2010 7:34 pm -
“...and try to stop staring at him!” “Huh?” The girl turned to look at her friend. Said friend roll…Sat May 01, 2010 4:00 pm -
Huh? :?: :?: What is this about? No idea. I thought you might be able to tell me what I could do wi…Sat May 01, 2010 3:30 pm -
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The anticipation is so sharp it is like broken glass in Jonah’s mouth. The needle hovers above his …Sat May 01, 2010 3:28 am -
Rotting in the ground It is a cold day in the young Man’s town. People are crowded around as pallbe…Fri Apr 30, 2010 8:55 pm -
They had never come back. Frank was in the park until closing, when a police officer checking for d…Thu Apr 29, 2010 1:49 pm -
Ari has beautiful hair, her mother says, like copper and gold, like a lion’s mane, and sometimes sh…Thu Apr 29, 2010 11:53 am -
I like to keep it classy and simple, I'll review something of who ever reviews my work. Greatly app…Thu Apr 29, 2010 1:53 am -
For Rose My name is Julie. If you could see me now you would think I was just a normal girl. A tall…Wed Apr 28, 2010 9:42 pm -
I wrote this in fifteen minutes. w00t. Note: If you wern't mentioned, I'm sorry. Don't hate me beca…Wed Apr 28, 2010 6:25 pm -
Some said that the girl had beauty parallel to Aphrodite. Others on Olympus regarded her as polite,…Wed Apr 28, 2010 3:53 pm -
You look across your room, through the window and notice a girl staring directly at you. Wherever y…Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:26 am -
It was a calm, clear night in Braidswood. A warm breeze blew through the trees as Luna and Ava left…Tue Apr 27, 2010 3:42 pm -
I. Ainsley Shae asks me if I’m all right. I can feel her hand on mine, and she’s saying it, echoey …Tue Apr 27, 2010 2:25 pm -
Mary whimpered. She nosed the ground, feeble whine slowly edging out of her throat. She scrabbled a…Mon Apr 26, 2010 5:34 pm -
So this is a story I wrote for a contest. It had to be no more than four pages, so sorry if some pa…Mon Apr 26, 2010 7:40 am -
Alright, so this is just something random I came up with, but I'd like to continue with it (when I …Mon Apr 26, 2010 4:20 am -
i. The bell rings and Amanda Bontemps looks at her bumpy with calluses hands, and imagines what her…Sun Apr 25, 2010 9:48 pm -
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Author's Note: This is a one shot that was written in a few hours. There is some violence in this p…Sun Apr 25, 2010 7:00 pm
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