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Your soul lies within Hidden but alive And no matter where you've been It always seems to strive It…Fri Feb 10, 2006 1:04 am -
>.> I Cannot write poetry, but I Did write this piece, long time ago... so lame.. :roll: The wind h…Fri Feb 10, 2006 1:01 am -
Nothing is better than wasting my days on you Knowing that some part of me will fade as you become …Fri Feb 10, 2006 12:44 am -
LET MY PEOPLE STAY There is a place on the Mediteranean where I learned to walk, run and ride where…Thu Feb 09, 2006 8:27 pm -
Did you hear the cries of the severed ones, who left a trail of blood when they left the road, taki…Wed Feb 08, 2006 12:47 am -
Sixteen Years Gone By Sixteen years gone by Pretending not to care If you get a card or a flower Wh…Mon Feb 06, 2006 11:42 pm -
Delicate beauty sits in the shadows Screaming into eternity Dreaming a vision of death In an elabor…Mon Feb 06, 2006 11:39 pm -
so very small barely alive though through the hardships i try to survive no one there to answer my …Sun Feb 05, 2006 6:17 pm -
I wrote this, wanted to know if it was any good, hope you like it. It takes place in a land of pove…Sat Feb 04, 2006 4:45 am -
Stanza 1: First off, you may wanna add mroe line breaks into the poem. it already has a little poem…Fri Feb 03, 2006 2:03 am -
I don't really like it myself but I have nothing better to do :? so I'm posting it..critiques are w…Fri Feb 03, 2006 2:00 am -
I’m learning how to be in love With every passing day The fireworks that fall about me Dance my bre…Fri Feb 03, 2006 1:32 am -
I bid Remembrance a rough farewell And hope that She will beckon me For I would miss the way She’d …Fri Feb 03, 2006 1:18 am
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I look in the mirror, And who's the girl I see? Thank goodness that she's me, And me is me is me. H…Tue Jan 31, 2006 9:07 pm -
here I am standing at your doorstep waiting for you wishing that the rose in my hand hadn’t died pe…Mon Jan 30, 2006 10:08 pm -
today was so quiet i could hear the ice melt in my glass. sunlight trickled through the windows and…Mon Jan 30, 2006 9:42 pm -
At last. Something poetically tangible (or so I hope) from me. Sorry it it's bad, but my writer's b…Mon Jan 30, 2006 7:11 pm -
This was a colaboration between me and CL. Hope you enjoy it You fell in my hands, flailing, prayin…Mon Jan 30, 2006 2:38 pm -
i am a frog who challenged a god the battle was rough but he was too tough in the end , i fell and …Mon Jan 30, 2006 3:02 am -
Look at me! I’m your puppet I sing and dance And play my clarinet Just for you, my darling Because,…Sun Jan 29, 2006 6:59 am -
Awww... this is so sweet! ...I think I am in love with you now. :shock: It's just... when I read it…Sun Jan 29, 2006 2:59 am -
I cannot feel your pain; I guess I am too happy. Don't tell me what I say, Is "totally sappy". If y…Sun Jan 29, 2006 2:28 am -
Sleek and thin Like horse hair on a violin Flowing and drowning in matrimonial bonding A bickering …Sat Jan 28, 2006 7:22 pm -
Cut yourself Starve yourself Claw out your eyes. You'll still be the same ugly girl you despise. Yo…Sat Jan 28, 2006 1:27 am -
The line break on the first italics line I absolutely hated. Eugh, I dunno why, but it just threw m…Fri Jan 27, 2006 2:08 pm -
I wrote this poem. It's not about suicide, it's a different kind of goodbye. Insult this, rip it to…Fri Jan 27, 2006 2:02 pm -
We all watch what we're doing, Every moment, Every day, Our movements can be misleading, And we do …Fri Jan 27, 2006 2:19 am -
i hate you. another perfect poem? what's wrong with you? the title - intriging, caught my eye immed…Thu Jan 26, 2006 10:22 pm -
Teacher, five children, they hurt me They say it’s my fault that I’m black They said I was wicked, …Thu Jan 26, 2006 9:11 pm -
ive never really written poems before so this is kinda my first one, keep that in mind! An infant c…Thu Jan 26, 2006 9:06 pm
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resurrection : act of rebirth. With you it’s my time to be free, To touch, To learn, To see who’s t…Wed Jan 25, 2006 12:00 am -
You aren’t exactly the strongest person in this world You fall apart by Tuesday afternoon, Plunging…Tue Jan 24, 2006 4:55 am -
i didn't get the point of the poem, really, except for the end. then again i'm multitasking the the…Sun Jan 22, 2006 3:34 am -
I’m stitching my soul together from the latest blow We try to share needles, but we know - it’ s ne…Sun Jan 22, 2006 2:04 am -
Hmm... I sort of could understand this. You're losing your touch old yeller. :P I liked it though, …Thu Jan 19, 2006 11:38 pm -
I’m a desecrated Deflowered image of a soul I feel it slowly fading As I stand my solid ground The …Thu Jan 19, 2006 11:29 pm -
*I apologize*Wed Jan 18, 2006 2:23 am -
wow i loved the poem. i really liked how you did the little intro-thing, which his what i guess you…Wed Jan 18, 2006 1:35 am -
"Why do fools fall in love?", is a question I've always wondered. Up until now, in that department …Tue Jan 17, 2006 4:33 am -
Your eyes are a mixture of green and blue, of love and pain; letting me know that this is the start…Mon Jan 16, 2006 8:46 pm -
I am shielded by darkness: growing upon the fears The worries From all the taunting memories I am d…Mon Jan 16, 2006 8:10 am
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I’m sitting in a blackened room Tying knots in golden thread The smile that I’m lying in Is glossed…Sat Jan 14, 2006 9:20 pm -
Caught up feelings,tripped emotions, spilled blood and cut out insides. Liquid tears turn cold and …Sat Jan 14, 2006 12:02 am -
Waistland There in that dry desert, that flat expanse of thirst and want, live the empty people. Th…Fri Jan 13, 2006 5:40 am -
Time stopped February twentieth. Tests taken, processed— seven warning signs predicted their result…Fri Jan 13, 2006 2:35 am -
Reminder Spirits wandering lost and angry starved and hollow haunting faces stare Two come to remem…Fri Jan 13, 2006 2:29 am -
This is some poetic blabber that I came up with while reading Upton Sinclair’s The Jungle . I hope …Fri Jan 13, 2006 2:23 am
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I hate her. I hate the way she thinks, rethinks, thinks again without stopping, pounding through my…Thu Jan 12, 2006 5:26 pm -
As fruitful as regret Looking away from whatever life begets I’m turning away I’m holding sway Over…Tue Jan 10, 2006 12:08 am -
I like the imagery. My question is, what does it gain from the line breaks? You're an expert poet (…Mon Jan 09, 2006 6:47 pm
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