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wow, I have listened to the song a few times now and your voice is absolutely insane. Like, it is the most beautiful voice I have heard in a long ...

Hi! This is a nice and neat little poem; let's get into my observations They don't understand - They won't understand This is so true. I remember being in a ...

Hi Dom! Not sure how I missed that you posted some flash fiction, but I am excited to review it! I think the feelings presented in this piece are very ...

Hi! This is a really beautiful poem, and i'm here to review it today! i anticipate solitude ‎it used to be ‎an old friend of mine ‎we were good mates ...

Helllooo. So, we have a little interlude. It's shorter and honestly on my first read I didn't spot anything that I would change or want to edit, which is great, ...

Firstly, I am not a big fantasy reader, so going into my review, please take some of what I say with a pinch of salt because I may just not ...

Hi Creeper! This was... short and sweet , we'll say. I think you could go a little more into her head and how she thinks about the school because it's ...

Hi Bug! I read the first chapters ages ago (not sure I reviewed it though, should definitely go and do that!) I like the sensory elements here, the coffee smell ...

okay so i finally got around to piecing my review together. I made a bunch of notes before and I don't know why I didn't just review it then! Anyway... ...

Hi! Here to review your piece today! I think this is an effective piece about intrusive thoughts and nighttime rumination. It's very compact, and I like how you use very ...

Hi Creeper! I've been enjoying this fanfiction, so lets get straight to it! Jason painted the face of the doll one last time and then, he stepped back. Very nice ...

Woo, back to Raisa! Haven't read a chapter of her's in a while! I HATE my dreams!! I don’t want to go to sleep anymore! Last night I dreamed that ...

Hi, I'm here to review this as part of the checklist challenge! Firstly, I am so glad you call it a full stop. Because I am sick of having to ...

Hi there! This is a beautiful poem that enlightens me about feelings and thoughts I have not personally experienced. I am not asian, so it is not something personal to ...

Strengths: I like how we start with Branwen on the shelf, and Jason shaving the wood in the toy shop. On the surface, it is mundane, but it has such ...