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thank you for the review! you bringing up some great points that i need to work on, i think some of these i got carried away trying to write something ...

I think for the thing about the hospital; in the second chapter Lottie explains that patients were moved around to make room for the infected / adults with the parasite. ...

ah thank you for clarifying! I shall definitely start from wing 1 and work my way through, then maybe I can give a review that makes a bit more sense ...

I’m going to properly respond and make some notes from you feedback after work, but damn you should consider being a real editor! You’re picking up on stuff that my ...

thank you for your review tikaya! i'm so happy you are enjoying it. I love your views on ravi, it's so nice to see other opinions on him because I ...

thank you for the review! A good point about the wheelchair - i need to find a better way to describe her learning how to use it! And I agree, ...

thank you so much for your kind review! I agree that some scenes need more room to breathe with the worldbuilding and character development. I think my editing really needs ...

Thank you for your review! Honestly this is probably my least favourite chapter so far. I wish I had changed it to be more action based, but I really wanted ...

thanks for the review, tikaya! You're so right that aubrey should have some more reactions and internal dynamics towards the wheelchair, and when she is learning from Neus. She IS ...

no worries, there will be another chapter tomorrow! I'm editing it tonight! The connection that aubrey has to kurt & the farm will become apparent in one or two chapter's ...

aahh thank you so much for your kind review. You have no idea how much this warmed my heart! I am so glad you're enjoying it. You're so right, I ...

Thank you for your review! With the CryCast / Ident, the CryCast is the name of the overall broadcast (the person who makes it is called Cry, he gets introduced ...

thank you for your review! The main characters, Kurt, Lola, Aubrey are all around 15 or 16. Rev, Cherry and Malcolm are 16/17, Katie, Pebbles, Bryn, Cai are around 12 ...

thank you for your review! The main characters, Kurt, Lola, Aubrey are all around 15 or 16. Rev, Cherry and Malcolm are 16/17, Katie, Pebbles, Bryn, Cai are around 12 ...

@Tikaya oo that's actually a good idea. It subverts the idea that the girls should be the ones looking after the kids and the boys need to fight. I might ...