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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Eggshells are Hot Rocks and Glass.

    Would love any feedback! giving another go at this style of poetry, i wrote this when I was in a deep place as a way to not buckle under stress, ...

    Yesterday
  • Short Story » Other, Supernatural Re: In such a lonely world

    I really love the lonely, kind of sad vibe this story has going for Perdita. That image of her living in a broken-down house in the woods that's still pink ...

    Yesterday
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Somewhere it's still 7 A.M. (Afterglow)

    Sorry for the long poem lol wrote this year's back but thought I'd still share my telling of childhood, specifically mine, you don't have to read it all i suggest ...

    Yesterday
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Not fair

    I liked the way you wrote this, it honestly is a good telling of how that is always gonna be like, i have siblings and well i honestly get the ...

    Yesterday


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