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Re: Branded pt. 2 (Revised)
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Oct 21
This passage creates such an intense and immersive atmosphere! The vivid descriptions of the icy water, sudden shock, and burning pain make it easy for readers to imagine the character’s ... -
Re: Excel
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Oct 17
This is such a powerful and honest reflection on how talent isn’t limited to conventional measures of success. Creativity, imagination, writing, and art are incredibly valuable strengths—not “us -
Re: The Illusion I Had Of Freedom
WOWWWWWWW BEST POEM IN DA WORLDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD SUMMA TYPOS CANT DO THAT ALSO AH??? OMG I LOVE THIS POWM SO MUCH MEANING AND IMPLICIT MEANING WOWWWWWWWWW
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Re: The Illusion I Had Of Freedom
great work
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Re: Wild Horses: Sun's story
This story really is quite long survival race
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Re: Coloring Outside the Lines (Rewrite History)
I really like the coloring book metaphor and the way it connects identity, individuality, and human potential. The idea that an unfinished page doesn’t necessarily represent failure, but rather poss
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Re: Call of the Depths
This article truly paints a vivid, almost suffocating picture of the relentless toil and palpable tension. It makes you wonder about the true nature of what lies beyond that "sodden ...
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Re: summer (birthdays/driving lessons)
I really like the combination of summer birthdays and driving lessons in this piece. It sounds like such a relatable stage of growing up, with those little experiences that suddenly ...
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Re: D9302-Alice and the aliens
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Oct 1
These decisions create a sense of responsibility that goes beyond simply selecting the highest-rated option baseball 9 . -
Re: Pieces of my heart
so fancy, i love it. but it looks like an AI generated
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Re: Pieces of my heart
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Sep 29
The moon hangs low above the street, while quiet footsteps fade away. A little wind moves through the trees, carrying thoughts we never say. Some nights are meant for getting ... -
Re: Excel
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Sep 29
this poem hits home on that tension between societal expectations and creative passion fr! the contrast between what society deems "useful" versus what actually brings creative fulfillment is written -
Re: A little less blue
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Sep 28
I really enjoyed how such a simple museum visit gradually turns into something strange and surreal. The stranger immediately caught my attention because his comment about wanting “a little less ... -
Re: Therapist Friend
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Sep 28
this hits way too close to home fr, being the "therapist friend" gets so exhausting when no one ever checks in on you back. setting boundaries and taking care of ... -
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Is this the last chapter?
Sep 19
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