BlackInk

HAHAHAAHA! All i could say was WTF!!! it was funny, made me cr with laughter and there for, very succesful. i love the idea of the Bible Porno. Very original ...

WOW! i love it! well written. I was getting the feel that you were talking about Christ Jesus, yes?? maybe, im not sure, but your choice of words is good, ...

Very good! i LOVED it! kind of emo-depressive, buuuuut, that made me able to relate to it even more so. i LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED ...

wow! Awesome, Awesome, Awesome! I loved it! So sad and touching but it drew me in as well. As to the grammer? dont worry, grammar isnt my thing either :)i ...

Amazing! Loved it! SO well written. THe way you portrayed the characters was amazing. i got the feel that Midnight was a bitch but i felt sympathetic for her because ...

ummm... wow.... ok.... THis peice was good, but i was a little confused... What was in her shoulder? WHat was his from her womb? and was 'Mr. Grey' a figure ...

*clap, clap, clap* Just wow! I am left for words here. This is so inspiring, so powerful, so... out there it just makes me want to go out, and tell ...

It made me cry and shiver, giving me a sense of fear and pain. Good job *wipes away tears and smiles alittle* i really, really, REALLY enjoyd it. I hope ...

Sorry, but i agree with tgirly. Also you did something that i do to, put comma's at the end of each line. It didnt have a very good flow though. ...

Hey There, I liked the choice of words and all, but, i found it didnt quite grasp me in. I didnt find myself very entertained, because i didnt feel the ...

As of everyone above me, i to am puzzled by this poem. The imagery was good, as i could sense the dolls emotions, but the term 'monster' i was abit ...

I love it But I think the rhymes could be improved some. You made details and I love that so much!!!But could use some more. ~Pixie2~ I agree with her. ...

Hey There Gorgeeous. :) I Loved it. I, too, have fear of the dentist, and im also, nearly 15 ^^; I agree with what was said above, but in the ...

Hey There Gorgeous :) Good job. I like it, and it is extremely well written for a rough draft xD i love it. Goodjob, and i could relate to many ...

Good Job, I do agree with Sassy. Reading it allowed would also show you rhythm but otherwise, great job. Well Done :) I would like to see more of your ...