Cailey

I liked the poem, it was good, and I could feel the agony you were describing. My feeling are numb, This should be my feelings are numb or my feeling ...

Good job, it was short and cute. I noticed a few things, but the story was good the way it is, so feel free to ignore me. what the matter ...

So, I really was meaning to write a helpful review, but like everyone else said, this poem was just really good. "You'll never be alone." He said. I think this ...

This was good, I liked the way you wrote in present tense, it really did make the story sound more graceful. You had a new paragraph for each sentence, which ...

Good job, that was really sweet. I loved it. The line "Is like Christmas every once in a while" didn't fit the rhytm quite right, but overall, this was great. ...

This was good, I really liked your revised version. However, the line, "for the fire burns when the tide turns." Didn't fit quite right. It just didn't match the rhythm. ...

Good job! I liked this, it made me laugh. I really enjoy reading from different points of view, and you don't often get to read about how an ant feels. ...

This was good, I liked your open ending. You had good descriptions, but towards the end you didn't describe enough. And, you need to edit! There are several minor mistakes, ...

This story is great. It definitely is creepy. I agree that it is a little bit confusing, specifically this part didn't make a whole lot of sense. Even after reading ...

This is a great beginning. It was interesting and well written. Your style really gave me a feel for the two brothers, and it makes me want to keep reading. ...

This was a great story idea. I love how you told it from the dragon's point of view, because it gives a feel for Sylvester's personality. There are a few ...

So, everybody else already commented on your mistakes, but even with the errors it was a great story. Someone mentioned Monty Python and the Holy Grail, and I definitely agree! ...

This was a really interesting story, I liked it. There are a few places where you're missing some punctuation. Also, in the first paragraph you used the word "built" three ...