Crysi

Wow, this is good. Really powerful, and that is how thoughts go when you're worried about something..

*blinks* Please. PUNCTUATION IS YOUR FRIEND, as is grammar. Check those before you post so we can actually make sense of this..

I actually like the mystery of it. I think you did a great job hinting to the real story without spelling it out for the reader. Let the reader use ...

Hmm.. It's a little choppy. Other than that it's alright.

Very, very beautiful. Reminds me of two of my poems.. This is wonderful.

Anytime. :) Besides, I usually don't get anything to edit.. Probably because I rarely offer it anymore lol. Now it's usually by request, and I've only received one in the ...

That's an excellent talent to have. I'll have to study this to learn how to do it correctly lol.. I can never describe things! Anyway, if I don't have the ...

*grins* There's our talented Braddy! Love this darling. Shows your style and your emotions and.. I absolutely love it. Wow. Reading it again takes my breath away. *smiles*

This is 100% amazing. I loved it all the way through. You truly have great talent.

Hmm.. This was good. Not one of your best, but still good. The only part I didn't like was the "three magic words." That's just too.. common. And it doesn't ...

*blinks* VERY old. But I like this.. and I absolutely LOVE the last two italicized lines. It's so.. venomous. I can picture it being said with a harsh sneer on ...

Aww that's really sweet. :)

Wow. So, a true story? You're a brave man for posting that. Very nice. I applaud you.

Wow, this is.. deep. Very thoughtful. I'm going to have to read this a few more times. Soak it in a bit more.

I LOVE THIS!!!! Excellent, excellent, excellent. Purely genius. Nothin to critique here.