DomTheDumb

Looking forward to the next one!

I'm sorry, mate, but I don't understand some stuff from your review lol. "the voices and notes ergeing him felt a little too scripited" wdym? What voices and notes? And ...

Hey @Tikaya When you have time, and when you feel better, I'd love your rev on the rework! All parts as so far written btw @Liv22 (in case you're still ...

Thanks for your review! I'm glad you liked it. Remember; this is a part 2. A lot your questions that you asked in your last paragraph are answered by part ...

@Liv22 if you're interested!

I'm really glad you enjoyed it, Liv! I'm writing part 2 as we speak. It's just a 6000 word short story, I'm afraid - not a book. But this is ...

@Tikaya told you I'd rewrite! Anyway, reading your ch.1 pt.2 now :)

Hello, hello! I've started reading now; I can't review it immediately since I have a busy Monday ahead but maybe later tonight (IST). Today definitely tho! Liking what I'm reading ...

Hello, hello! This weekend was so busy for me, dude! Anyway thanks for the review. Just a question; what's A/N? Also, the diesel thing - in my experience large diesel ...

Idk how I missed this lmao. Ty for the rev! Good points, as usual lmao. WOS Ch.2 soon btw :)

@Tikaya @4revgreen I promise that I'll try to not kill 'em :)

Ugghhh I made some stupid decisions when writing this. I didn't plan this out at allll But hey, that's why we're all here lmao. Thanks for the reviews, Tik! Great ...

What a pleasure to see some desi writing! I'll review this later today (India time, mind). Looking forward to it :D

Read the review now in full and fuuuuckkk those are some great points. Aight, back to the drawing board

Haven't read the full review yet, at work, but in the opening sentence dreaming acts as a verb. It's a rare but correct turn of phrase lmao. Dreaming here is ...