DomTheDumb

Hey, Q! Ty for the review; I didn't see the notif earlier for whatever reason lol. Also this review is so helpful! I agree with a lot of what you're ...

I'm so glad you liked it! Ty for the rev :)

Formatting for this is ALL over the place. I don't know why. Maybe it might be better to just upload an image of the doc? Idk

Where's the poem lmao

Yup, I completely understand. Glad I could help :)

Apparently, publishers are really strict about lyrics so I'm going to have to scrap the last line before I submit Fml

Glad it helped and, ngl, I've never heard or read asked briskly before lmao

I'm so glad you liked it :D

Is it time? Mayhaps. Mayhaps

Thanks for the review! The edit suggestions are extremely helpful. And, ngl, between yours and Hira's review I want to get back to this much earlier than I'd planned... But ...

Hello! Your main concerns are the same as everyone else's and, as usual, they're absolutely spot on. It's just one of those things that I didn't realise I was doing ...

Genuinely laughed out loud in office. Man people are morons

Lmao that's so funny

Every critique, review, or piece of criticism of this work must include the word 'bananas' at least once. If 'bananas' is not used, the critique is incomplete and must be ...

Yeah I'm just posting it here in chapters because I'm posting as I go. It's not actual chapters lol