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Re: Tricking myself.
I really like how raw and personal this feel. The repetition of “You always tried” makes the poem feel emotionally heavy. I'd suggest reworking the opening slightly, as the poem ...
Oct 18
I really like how raw and personal this feel. The repetition of “You always tried” makes the poem feel emotionally heavy. I'd suggest reworking the opening slightly, as the poem ...
Oct 18