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alrighty *crakcs knuckles* lets get down to work.

i liked it. And i was honoured to get asked to critique. lol. from what i read, there was nothing wrong with it. Well done. Sorry if you wanted a ...

right.... yeah.... take riedas advice, and then some ;)

oh my goodness.... i cant even find the right words.... just oh my goodness.......

lmao!!!

oh my god no!!! :(

lol yes, i agree. i didnt have a lot of time to actually think of a plot, let alone write one. Im not sure if there was supposed to be ...

lol sorry, i clicked submit instead of preview

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dont call people bitches!! its mean!! unless you have a good reason to. Incan, did the muse do anything to you that gave her the title of the name "bitch"??? ...

SQUISH THE SPIDER!!!

scribbles, are you on a poetry streak? Youve written heaps in the last couple of days! goodness!

awww scribbles *hugs* Thats really romantic... i like it... but i did get a little confuzzled at the "You weave still, fair Arachne Grander than Orpheus or the artful Daughters ...

thats really cute.

wow... thats really good.. but whats the Game? thats the one thing I didn't get. But I liked the way it was written, the description and the like. It was ...