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That's a good piece, you put a lot of effort into it. I am so glad you wrote #2. It was really fun reading it. I hope you continue writing, ...

Wow! That was really good. I wished you did more though, or posted #2! lol Anyway, I didn't see anything wrong with that... no grammar, spelling, etc. That's about it, ...

Awww. that was so sweet. I really like the ending like the last three or four lines. Very cute, -- M.B.

Way cool! I echo everyone else, about the crits and the errors. I love this story! Is 15 coming soon? -- M.B.Author

HMm....sounds familiar! lol! I liked it, it was awesome! -- M.B.Author

I echo everyone else. I get it, but I found it all little dull. Like, no rhymes. It sounded like you were trying to rhyme, but couldn't do it very ...

I know that this is really long, and a little boring, but, it is a report for school. I know it is long. Crit welcome! -- M.B.Author

I quite like it. I fond it entertaining. Yeah, I would definitely say it is a poem! There not much I can say. It's kinda short. XD -- M.B.Author

Okay, just to let everyone know. This is a script. So it is supposed to be written like this (I know that because of my teacher). So enjoy! -- M.B.Autor

Wow! The depth and true meaning of this poem is paralizing! Very well done. I am speechless. I give it a thumbs up! But I am already scared of sharks, ...

*Twitch* Hm...what do I think about this poem? Oh yeah! It was interasting. I too liked the way it rymed. I too liked it in a weird/freaky way. I too ...

Um...Why did you delete this? I you have is ...gone. Not much of a poem. I wich I could've read it. Are you going to repost this? Please PM if ...

Awesome! I know about Twilight, but, don't read it. I guess it follows the story...? Anyway, I like your ryming. Good job. -- M.B.Author

AHH! I am very mad, I read part three and then read part one *sniffs* Anywho, great job! I love this. Going to read part two! -- M.B.Author

Wow, that was kinda freaky and creepy. I liked the starting, I really liked the starting. Your writing is good. Cannot wait to hear more! -- M.B.Author