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Re: Ice Cubes #28
It was good. Keep up the good work. -- M.B.Author
May 21, 2007 -
Re: Grandma
It was sweet Lucky_Duck. Thanks, I know MawMaw would've appreciated it. I did. It was a little short, but that wasn't bad. Thanks. :D -- M.B.Author
May 21, 2007 -
Re: Unknown
It was good. But the title, is it suppossed to be "Unknown"? Or did you not have a title for it? Oh, well! Keep up the good work! -- M.B.Author
May 20, 2007 -
Re: Masked
I echo everyone else. It was good, but it was too short. You might of wanted to add more detail. -- M.B.Author
May 20, 2007 -
Re: Fairytale
I liked it alot. And yes FUNNY HOW IT WORKS! :twisted: About the poem, I loved how you described it. Two thumbs up!! -- M.B.Author
May 20, 2007 -
Re: Betrayal
WOW! I totaly understand. I liked how you put it! It is so true. Good job. Keep up the great work. -- M.B.Author
May 20, 2007 -
Re: Why?
It was good, and me too, I'm not emo. I hope never to be one either. But, your poem was good. Keep up the good work! -- M.B.Author
May 20, 2007 -
Re: Accident? Hardly...
was interesting. Not one of my faves. I echo everyone else, punctuation! Well, that's about it. -- M.B.Author
May 20, 2007 -
Re: This Instant
It was good, and it was thought provoking. It was very good. And ironically, it hit close to home. And it seemed so real. I appreciate you writing this. I ...
May 19, 2007 -
Re: "Mice"
Aaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, that was so cute! It was adorable. But a little short, I understand that you wrote it awhile ago. But, still, it was cute. I liked it alot. -- ...
May 19, 2007 -
Re: Black and White Movies
Yup, Yup, It was good! I totaly agree with FUZZHEAD. W O W Two thumbs up. -- M.B.Author
May 19, 2007 -
Re: chessical
It was good. The ryming was somewhat off. But, it was entertaining and somewhat fun to read. I really don't know what to say. -- M.B.Author
May 18, 2007 -
Re: Fire's Eclipse
It was good. -- M.B.Author
May 18, 2007 -
Re: Magic for Dummies
Your humor was a little weak, but it was creative and fun to read. I think there might have been one or two typos, but who cares about typos? (not ...
May 18, 2007 -
Re: Drizzle
It was good, a few shaky places here and there, but over all it was good. It was interasting in a good way. I like your stories, so keep on ...
May 18, 2007
