Maki-Chan

ummmm, you should space it out alittle more cause it is hard for me to read! >_< I'll be back when its done :thud: please forgive me if I insulted ...

It is interesting and has great word use, but.... What the heck is it about?? :?: :?: I'm confused?

:D I like this peom, its an interesting way to approch this subject. It was enjoyable, keep up the good work! ^_^ :( -uhhh, sigh, I have a fever and ...

wow......WOW :o Oh my god this is great!!! It shows so much feeling and it flows so wonderful. It makes me feel sad which is a powerful feet cause I ...

Well, I say that you are at a good start. I do know a little bit about pioneers, cause I live in Wyoming and it is a part of the ...

My friend, its not so bad. Perfect for a haiku if you fix it up a bit. But it is a regular poem that needs to be longer. I love ...

I thought it was not too bad. How can you be sitting then walking? You need to tell you got up. Also like I've learned capitalize your I. Ok, I ...

ummm... you should post a new topic for every new chapter. Like I was told before if its too long it tends to disscourage readers. People are lazy! don't worry ...

I thought it was pretty good, not one of your best but... I did enjoy it. maybe if you want to you can write about something that has never been ...

well what can I say. You're a lot better at poetry than I am. I like this one. How you say the crickets chirping are annoying and stuff. I enjoyed ...

oh...this is great! I like it. It a way I'm like John Smith being open and stuff. Nt very religious, and I can handle the truth very easlily. I hope ...

I know how this person feels. One time when i woke up i could'nt see anything. I started to panic as i thought of all the things i would miss ...

well...hmmm...I'm a sucker for a good romance story. This is what i have to say. I enjoyed the theme of it and there is some emtion to it, but its ...