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the dialogue really just felt far more modern than the setting or the prose itself. Priya is shockingly direct

hey tik. This was for a 2k word short story contest so yes some things are a but rushed for my style. I think i bit off more than I ...

aah i am so sorry. I copied it from the pdf and it single spaced everything. It should be all good now!

Some sentences are a bit of a read, grammatically speaking. There were also parts where the description ran on a bit too long, or tried to do too many things ...

haha thanks for the enthusiasm. I forgot to disclaim that this was a 2k short story for a competition I was in so that might be part of why some ...

oh! aight is also ai-ght if you say it right. and money flow is a subtle allusion to water issues :[

hiii Wolfi. Yeah, there's a lot going on in this one haha. I used both Bible verses after seeing a preacher podcast with an AI cover photo and kinda spiraled. ...

hi tikaya. So it is my 2jd draft but its a complete rewrite soo, kinda a 1st draft still? lol I actually was told originally that this chapter explained too ...

that makes a lot of sense xD

well that's terrifying xD

im just here for the holy guacamole (I wear a shirt to volleyball that has an avocado blocking a hit and it reads "holy blockamole")

sorry if you get multiple notifications. I accidentally sent this as a comment first so I had to delete and reupload

haha thank you so much for stopping by. I beta read 3 novels during infancy when I couldnt get baby M transferred to the crib xD so I know the ...

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hahaha so Kenway isn't a bad guy but it's amusing seeing everyone who didnt read the prologue take his story to seem so fishy. Makes me think maybe Carris should ...