PixieStix

Thanks!! ~pixie~ Liv,laugh,love :D

ummm...wow I thought that I was great. You made great points. ~Pixie~ Liv,laugh,glow :D

thanks!!! Anyway, I did re-read the story but.....ok. I guess I did not re-read it enough. ~Pixie~ Liv,laugh,glow :D

please leave comments!! ~Pixie~ Liv, laugh,glow

I love it But I think the rhymes could be improved some. You made details and I love that so much!!!But could use some more. ~Pixie2~

It sounds pretty scary but overall I loved it and I thought that it was alittle confusing. I think that you need to rhyme alittle more!!! ~Pixie2~

at the end, I had to rush because I did not know what to say, Any thoughts? ~Pixie2~

I love it! You are awsome, And Ps. check out my poem Candy Kiss in the narritive poetry if you have achance and give me pointers! ~Pixie2~

Very detailed, I love it! ~Pixie2~

Thanks alot.I thought the same thing! - Pixie2~

I thought that it was one of the best poems I had ever written!!! Pixie2

sorry I spelled something wrong in the last post I made!!! ~Pixie2~

I love the kinda sadness in the poem. It made me want to add it to my favorites. No criticism here! I am very impressed. Great job! ~Pixie2~

I understand what you are trying to say. I should add more emotion and detail. I should go a little slower next time, and I know it was a little ...

this is my story, I worked so hard on it and I really hope you like it!Please relpy and give me tips! ~Pixie2~