SHUNKA

Thank you for your review! I did fix the A in the one stanza as that was a typo, and I lwky didnt even bother with punctuation lol. Thank you ...

The "WHAT A LOVELY LEAF." at the end of your poem. I can just imagine looking up at a tree and just screaming that lol

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Thank you for your incredibly in depth review! And thank you for the advice and pointers you gave, I will definitely work on my skills with what you just wrote ...

Criticism welcome, plz tell me if I should remove the bold letters every other letter

Hi and thank you for your review! I will say I did get sloppy with the beginning of the stanzas lol, but the end of the poem was kind of ...

Thank you! I didn’t know the graham cracker method existed and this made me laugh a little.

Thank you for your review! Do you mind sharing the phrases made you pause because they didnt flow right? I want to understand because I might write this a little ...

Thank you! I'm glad you felt understood. This was based on a personal experience I had and I know the feeling. Also if you ever need to chat about it ...

Hi and thank you for your critique! I do like it when people give me these types of constructive criticism because it really helps me understand where I need to ...

Not my best piece but oh well 😅 Lowkey just gonna yeet this out into the world and forget about it. And I need to burn my sketchbook bc I ...

Thank you so much for your review! Yes the ending was abrupt thanks for pointing that out. I will definitely take this into other poems I do to try to ...

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Thanks! I am doing better now, and I always find it interesting on how people can struggle mentally through different aspects yet still relate to the feeling. Thanks for the ...

Thank you!