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Dun dun dunnnnnn! As a side note, it always strikes me as funny when people describe cities as being snowy. I have never been in a big city which has ...

Hey snickerdooly! :D First of all, do a quick check and make sure that everything is spelled right. Right now, everything isn't quite right. ;) Anyway, for the voice! You ...

Hahaha! Ooooooh my. Charlotte and Lucky are so cute together! I say he get rid of Lola and take Charlie. Soon. They're kind of perfect for each other. Although, I ...

Hey SmritiBansal! :D First of all! You misspelled "their." You wrote it as "thier" instead. So make sure that you correct those spelling errors! Now, for your poem! I liked ...

Aw, this is adorable! :D One thing! I would change the poem slightly to this: Poor little eraser dog, he's missing one of his ears, a careless mistake in a ...

Hi seana! :D I know you didn't want us to comment on this, but... well... the spelling can be corrected easily. So do it! ;) First of all, this is ...

Hi Becca! :D Aha! A looking-into-mirror-and-confronting-yourself poem! :D I would probably start with stanza two, actually... the first stanza isn't really important overall to the poem, so I think it

Haha, I love that album, "Here Comes Science!" And then, you used that in a personalized poem invitation? Awesome! Were I your age, I would probably go out with you ...

Hey KAH! Demeter's right! It did sound more like a song than an actual poem. As a poem, it seemed much too repetitive and and rhyme-y (like that's even a ...

Oooh, I liked this poem! It kind of reminded me of Shel Silverstein's poems... and I adore Shel Silverstein. :) It also kind of reminded me of Dr. Seuss's "The ...

Hi Lena! Nate got the spelling and grammar part, so I won't bug you about that! :D Anyway, one of the things I would love to see is you going ...

Awww, so cute! Anyway, one of the things that I wondered about was, this guy is obviously dead, right? And he was meaningful to the girl who is still alive. ...

Hey Lawson! :D So, this format kind of reminds me of the Twilight zone! You have the prologue, where that one guy is talking about the Twilight Zone, then it ...

Hey Eli! I have to say, I have to agree with Abigail here! The poem just fell flat. It seemed like you were writing more of an opinion piece than ...

Hi introvert! :D Hmm... you have a very interesting poem! It kind of reminds me of the old-school romances that I so adore. :D One idea... maybe you can rewrite ...