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Re: The Growing Dragons: The Dragon's Path (Chapters 1-5)
Hia it’s been a while since you’ve come here but maybe you’re happy abt another review once you do check back in :3 I have had this on my list ...
Sep 15 -
Re: Chapter One – Alinea
And heading straight into ch1 :3 Again a really intriguing beginning part. Makes me think that they might actually pay in blood? But ofc it could also be a neat ...
Sep 14 -
Re: Prologue — Kael
I...honestly thought I have read and reviewed this by now. Whooops! Here we go, then! I already like your beginning paragraph. Especially the phrasing with "all the way to the ...
Sep 14 -
Re: On the American Dream: The Lighthouse & Of Mice and Men
Good morning! I saw your essay in the Green Room and marked it down for me to read later when I have a bit more time. Which is now =D ...
Sep 14 -
Re: Landlady
Hia Lim, I had this on my list forever but now I finally have the time to read it :3 Hmmm okay, I must admit I immediately stumbled over this ...
Sep 14 -
Re: The Eclipse Sword: Chapter 1
Hia Mika, I know you haven’t been on here in a long time but I remember lots of ppl loving your chapter so I am here to take a look ...
Sep 14 -
Re: Crawlers - Chapter Eighteen: The Middle of Nowhere
Hello Crawlers, my beloved =D I reread the other Middle of Nowhere Part again bc I couldn’t remember if she ever had him hold the Katana again and… Rev is ...
Sep 13 -
Re: The evidence
AH okay, I think I remember this part of the story, Sam trying to convince his parents. Or wait, in the last story, he said that not even photos convinced ...
Sep 12 -
Re: Chapter 1 | Ikara
So… I sometimes feel like I harp on the most useless details. And… I feel like your book should speak for itself when you present “multi-POV” right? So why would ...
Sep 11 -
Re: Prologue
Had this on my list for a while :3 So finally, here I come. The gold threads on the cover look v pretty, how did you make it? I rly ...
Sep 11 -
Re: The Doll Chronicles
What type of feedback would you like? I tend to give a scattershot approach when not directed properly ^^ Felt like reading something small and manageable as my final review ...
Sep 10 -
Re: Sunlight Through Concrete Rain - Part 5 (still WIP)
Alright, I was promised a scene other than a drawn-out shootout, let’s do this. I am kinda worried we will have a death in this chapter… 32 I kinda wish ...
Sep 10 -
Re: Raisa’s diary entry (9/24/1955)
Hia creeper, let’s see what Raisa is up to this time around, huh? =D I love how you nailed the tone of Raisa in this one. Like, her frustration is ...
Sep 10 -
Re: Visions Pt. 2
Yay and the next chapter begins with the cobalt blue flames. Let’s goo! Ohh are we in one such vision mentioned in the previous chapter now? Hmm you might want ...
Sep 10 -
Re: Visions
Well then friend, let’s see if you’re gonna be happy with my invasion XD Uhhh and since the poetry still intimidates me, let me start with GRAMMAR xd “star-woven” needs ...
Sep 10
