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Re: Two cursed young girls: Part One (Chapter Eleven: A sleep like Hell) [Nina Alexandria Hopkins]
And one more for good measure~ For a sec I confused this series with Emberlyn and Juniper but no, this is Nina! (Confusion on my part not any of your ...
Jun 27 -
Re: Just a fangirl
Okay I am already intrigued by the the A/N here. She’s a fangirl and she’s asking her “idol” to give back her friend, so he took her friend and she ...
Jun 27 -
Re: Jeff’s little gift
Morning! I feel like starting with a long repetition of “piece of paper” might not be the best for this one? 😊 Hmm you might have wanted a different way ...
Jun 27 -
Re: Agents of Time: Chapter Three; Deafening silence
Good morning lady, Hmmm from the summary I kinda expected a bigger description and reaction from James about the screech. Some pain and more? Okay… I feel like you don’t ...
Jun 27 -
Re: [LMS] Loosely Lawful | 19
I see, LMS is treating you well? Let’s see what this new chapter brings :3 Ok and the first two sentences start with “Sera” … Might have wanted to do ...
Jun 26 -
Re: Stained Rose: Chapter 2
Hia, decided to come back to this one in my efforts to clear out the Green Room 😊 Hope you’re doing well! I like that she’s thinking abt the incident ...
Jun 26 -
Re: A freudian analysis on Oyasumi Punpun
Hah, I do appreciate the music rec but I generally don’t have music on when creating or reading^^ But I love the idea! Hmmm I feel like your essay has ...
Jun 25 -
Re: Wisdom vs Majority: Plato and Modern Democracy
Hia, must say essays are also not my strong suit but I feel like putting on my thinking cap today :3 Although I’m gonna start with a grammar tip: do ...
Jun 25 -
Re: Daisy sneaks off to the local library
Good afternoon! Short story time :) I feel like the Green Room is getting emptier and emptier which is super motivating for me to read more! I like the name ...
Jun 25 -
Re: curator
Hia! Beautiful profile picture! Poetry is usually not my strong suit but I did want to check out what type of things you are writing :) Hmm I wonder if ...
Jun 25 -
Re: The Prince of Apes
Hia and welcome to YWS. I hope you come back and settle in, write some reviews of your own and engage with the community 😊 For now, let me read ...
Jun 25 -
Re: Shadow (Chapter 5: Werewolf Time)
Werewolf time! Let’s goooo! Now you just have to spend the effort to prettify the links and you’d ascend! I like the description of the abandoned building! I don’t understand ...
Jun 25 -
Re: Ilna - Chapter 2
Good evening. Let’s head straight into Ch2 This is kinda a redundant sentence, no? “ all the more since, on a warmer day, they would have been light and dry“ ...
Jun 25 -
Re: 🖤🎀 Janice makes a human friend (part three) (last part) 🎀🖤
Okay I take that back, given how short this is, I think having it at the end of the last part would have worked way, way better ^^° I mean, ...
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Re: 🖤🎀 Janice makes a human friend (part two) 🎀🖤
Forgot to mention it last chapter but this was an excellent stopping point! Oh myyyy ahhh just imagine poor Endora in the box, first hearing the knife against the wall ...
Jun 24
