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Re: Loosely Lawful | 8
I like how we both focus on different aspects of this story
Sep 6 -
Re: ..
AI unfortunately steals from real books q_q (from all of us) so no wonder the very common phrases get flagged all the time :/ Ah well, the brain fog thing ...
Sep 5 -
Re: Sunlight Through Concrete Rain - Part 4 (still WIP)
Sounds good enough for me XD As someone who writes combat scenes that ppl tell me are compelling, I'm deeply intrigued :3
Sep 2 -
Re: World of Souls - Prologue
Good afternoon! It took me a while but I finally freed myself from the other responsibility to give your review proper time XD First of all: AWwww thanks for going ...
Aug 31 -
Re: The snake I nurture
Well then another one from the bookmark. The dice do favour you =D So, the summary… *squints to see if there are any metaphors to find there* there… have been ...
Aug 27 -
Re: The Weight of a Soul
Hia Ellie, have come to you in my efforts to work on my bookmarks :3 The pressing question is even: what is the weight of a soul, period. Not just ...
Aug 26 -
Re: all i'm sure of is that he's someone i've always known
Hia! Still going through my bookmarks so I hope you can bear with me =D I remember I bookmarked this over the intriguing summary :3 I do like the myth ...
Aug 26 -
Re: Exploring universe and me
Hia Alex, catching up on more of my book marks :3 I know, I know I am in the middle of replying to your reviews but since my list of ...
Aug 26 -
Re: Crawlers - Chapter Seventeen: The Farm
But more importantly, how did I do? =D What's my grade!! If you want opinions on characters you should ask that directly: What do you think abt Macey? If you ...
Aug 25 -
Re: Sunlight Through Concrete Rain - Part 3 (still WIP)
Happy to help :3 Now go write reviews too XD Because I have learnt that reading other people's works helps in understanding your own writing too~ the Green Room is ...
Aug 24 -
Re: WoS Ch14 - The Previous Day
Cover art by indigoblue36 on Deviant Art (I just made it more green with canva) And I do have questions! 1. What's your initial reaction to the chapter? 2. What ...
Aug 22 -
Re: Chapter 5
Remember to always rephase it in a positive outlook: You're not lazy, you are aware of your body's needs :3 If you start applying the paragraph thing with a new ...
Aug 21 -
Re: WoS Ch13 - Hubris
Well then! The story continues. And so do the questions! Did you know this is the first time we didn't get a Zoe narration in a chapter? :3 Cover Art ...
Aug 21 -
Re: Crawlers - Chapter One: The Farm
First of all, yay Skorpionne for starting crawlers! Good choice! Second of all, no bad Rev, I want more chapters ò.ó
Aug 20 -
Re: Sunlight Through Concrete Rain (WIP)
definitely the adding new chapters to the folder, otherwise ppl might not realise you have updated your chapter :3 This might be a good starting point: And you could make ...
Aug 20
