antigone

I liked it. It's simple and sweet but somehow it seems like the simpleness is deceptive and it's actually way to deep for me to get. But anyway, I liked ...

I liked it. It made almost-sense in a very weird way. For some reason it was really interesting.

I liked the Three Musketeers. And I dunno... Rudyard Kipling is awesome. Is he classic?

Wow! You're so nice! Thanks so much!

Thanks guys!

I wasn't gonna comment on this cause I don't have anything useful to say but I couldn't help myself because that is seriously amazing. The words, and the rhythm and ...

So sad... I like it though. I love the second stanza and where you made the smoke be Edgar's pulse.

I loved the first two stanzas but I didn't like the last one so much. Not sure why. Maybe the poem would be better if it was longer? Anyway, nice ...

That was awesome! I kinda figured they might both be perverts, but still. Hilarious! Great job! :)

The poem was pretty good but I really really loved the title. I suppose you meant to do this but all the Ims without apostrophes were a little annoying. I ...

I love the title. Cutting the periods like Chevy said would make it alot better, I think. Good poem though. I like it alot. :)

I think it's funny. But then again I've never read the Bible, so I might not know what I'm talking about. Good job though. :)

I like the repetition. I don't think you should cut anything. And I agree with Hunter about the lowercase/capitals thing.

I like it. The rhythm is a little weird but it was interesting. And I like the last line.

Um. It is rather terrible. :) But I love pee dot ess dot. It made me laugh.