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  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: Earth

    From what I can understand, are you asking how I can essentially properly hook a reader in, or make the writing flow without sounding overly confusing? If so, I see ...

    Oct 11
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: Earth

    Thank you for your feedback, there is seemingly a very specific pattern I need to work on with my writing skills. I appreciate your input, thanks!

    Oct 11
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: Earth

    Apologies for not replying sooner, thank you for your feedback and I'll definitely consider my word usage here. Thank you again

    Oct 7
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Chameleon

    Hey I see what you mean. I like the connection of the experience of culture shock and feeling different from the people around you. Thank you, but of course. Thank ...

    Oct 3
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology Re: Writing Practice - Advice Please!!

    Oh wow thank you. Yes I must say, I'm not the best when it comes to being particularly specific in my work at times with the inherent assumption people already ...

    Oct 3
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology Re: Writing Practice - Advice Please!!

    Hey hello, thank you so much for your feedback. After reading all of this, I would like to answer and ask some questions as well. In terms of the specific ...

    Oct 3


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