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Re: Blood and Water
My heart just about burst at the end of the story. The beginning started out harsh but the ending…so heartwarming and sentimental. I agree with Aunt Ludivine that the true ...
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Re: devotio
I enjoyed this story. It was tragic, but I liked reading it. I think that this is talking about wanting something despite the circumstance. In the beginning, the boy wanted ...
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Re: House of Blood: Part One: Chapter Zero ( Characters and Introductions)
This sounds like it’s going to be a good story. I particularly appreciate Jake’s nicknames for the villains, they are quite clever and creative. I think that the Faceless Man ...
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Re: The Tooth Fairy
When Wanda says that the Tooth Fairy is not going to “take another child” from her, does that mean that…Wanda had children before Timothy? Children who also lost their teeth? ...
Mar 19, 2023 -
Re: The Life and Subsequent Ending of a Marshmallow
Poor Arnold. All he wanted was to burn bright, but he melted away. At least he had Ms.Cocoa with him. Both marshmallow and hot chocolate will be remembered. In fact, ...
Mar 17, 2023 -
Re: The Spooky Squad: Chapter 2
This chapter is great! If Grace/Giggles were a real toy, I’d totally want her. As for the clowns…oh my god…YOU FOUND MY LONG LOST FAMILY/j! And…that devil horned guy Grace ...
Mar 15, 2023 -
Re: The Vamp: Transylvania Interlude (Part One)
Oh man…poor Sirena. She trusted György with her heart and soul and he took advantage of her. This origin was beautifully written and very haunting. Sirena loved György, but György ...
Mar 14, 2023 -
Re: Shoplifting Vampires (2.1)
Seems like a good plan to me. But it’s not going to turn out entirely like how Rev and the others want it to, I don’t think. I wonder how ...
Mar 13, 2023 -
Re: Shoplifting Vampires (2.0)
Their nicknames do have interesting stories. They’ve only got each other. They only like each other. I like DC Burk. He’s cool. I do agree that the nicknames are more ...
Mar 12, 2023 -
Re: Shoplifting Vampires (1.1)
Oooh they seem like good friends! I like that. What business do those builders have anyway to build a shop over the other shop? I have a good feeling about ...
Mar 11, 2023 -
Re: Shoplifting Vampires (1.0)
This is interesting. Shoplifting vampires? I can’t wait to read more. I think that Rev might be a vampire, but I could be wrong. (I think that Rev might be ...
Mar 10, 2023 -
Re: Nightshade's Reunion
If you’re up for it, I think that stories talking about how Aurora felt after being hypnotized and Nightshade and Ceiba’s conversation would be great! I do agree that Nightshade ...
Mar 10, 2023 -
Re: Nightshade and the moon festival (part 2)
Well, the party may be over now, but there’s always the next Moon Festival. I have one other chapter left, where she reunites with Ceiba. I wonder how this will ...
Mar 8, 2023 -
Re: Nightshade and the moon festival (part 1)
Glad to see Nightshade enjoying herself! This moon festival sounds pretty cool. The flower necklace matches Nightshade’s scales really well. The villagers seem nice so far. I’ve got two more ...
Mar 8, 2023 -
Re: Nightshade and the moon festival (Prologue)
Nightshade in a Moon Festival…this should be interesting. I wonder how the other villagers will feel about her. At least one of the elders likes her. Hopefully there isn’t any ...
Mar 6, 2023
