finncatphoebe

This is a very sweet story! I also read Jaye's review, so I'm going to try not to focus too much on grammar and flow in my review, instead I ...

Oo this had me! I found myself really locked into your story throughout the whole thing, but there were a few things that kinda threw me off. First, I know ...

Hi! So I thought your story was very good, I just have a few notes! Firstly there were some errors with grammar and sentence structure. I struggle with fhis myself ...

Hi! I'm bad at getting into my reviews so I'll just jump right into it! The first thing I want to point out is your letter in the beginning. It ...

Oh wow! I really enjoyed reading this piece, I thought the concept of going back and describing his interactions or brushes with death was very clever. Your descriptions were incredible. ...

Wow! This piece had me hooked from the very beginning! At the end, I found myself wondering more and more about the world you've set up. I'm curious to know ...

Hi! This is my first review on here so sorry if my wording is a little weird! First off, I thought your story was good! The reveal of the diary ...