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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Window

    i just wanted to say that you did such a good job with conveying fear as you grow up, especially learnt fear from personal experiences and outside experiences. the poem ...

    Sep 14
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: It really hurts

    lovely short poem! it’s a feeling we (or most of us) have had in the past. some stay in the hurt because it’s what we deem as safe and comfortable. ...

    Sep 14
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: But was it so bad?

    The boys in Alyssa’s school were nothing like the boys in the movies she watched in childhood. They were filthy, they didn’t care about feelings, and they made fun of ...

    Sep 13
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: Um, Like, Yeah?

    i know i’m about a year later, but i love, love, love this short story. it’s so mundane, and it’s so realistic, i could definitely imagine overhearing something like this ...

    Sep 13
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: It's a Boring World [Ch. I, Nine]

    The sun is shining, the birds are chirping, and the world is boring. immediate hook, lol. the character’s voice is consistent throughout; sarcastic and chipped, but somewhere along the lines ...

    Sep 13
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The last talk

    hey! so i just wanted to say that it’s a nice story. i get the gist here: someone misses someone and they’re mourning or reminiscing. overall, the intention was there ...

    Sep 13
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Floating

    I am just a shell sitting alone, while my soul looks down from above. Is this real? i love this poem simply because you start thinking this will be about ...

    Sep 13


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