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Hey! Today I'll be reviewing ur beautiful poem! I appreciate the straightforward, almost harsh approach, the author used in the poem. I knew from the title itself that the poem ...

Hey, calix! I personally enjoyed this composition, as the racing theme is undeniably clear from the start. The short lines and rapid rhymes gave the poem a swift, almost racing ...

Hey, liz! I enjoyed reading your work “Room 401”. Your approach to the subject did not make Rayan’s case feel like one has a singular answer. I particularly liked the ...

Hey moon! I have read your poem “My ocean.” I think that it is a good love poem, but I like that you managed to keep the theme of ocean/seas ...

Hey, moon! I really like this one! It seems straightforward but has quite an intriguing idea behind it. The first thing that struck me was the title itself - "Even ...

Hey Rithika! I really enjoyed the read, “Shared Solitude”. What stood out to me most was how the story transforms the concept of solitude. Firstly, the story portrays the narrator ...

Hey Red! I am loving the 2 nd chapter of “Sheep Dogs.” I especially liked how you slowed the pace and delved deeper into exploring the relationship between Elias and ...

Hey Red! Your writing in "Sheep Dogs" is truly beautiful. The opening immediately draws you in and pulls you through the whole story. I especially loved how you introduce us ...

Hi Nis! I absolutely loved reading about 'Jelly'. It was such an amazing, bizarre and frightening work of fiction and I loved how much you have invested into the world ...

Hey, moon! I enjoyed reading "Innocent love". I loved how you managed to transform an ordinary window, curtains, rain, breeze, dust into a sequence of unreturned loves. It's so innocent ...

Hey! Dom, I enjoyed these three chapters together as the story reaches new levels of its development. Having witnessed such an outcome, and seeing how Eliza, Maryam and Dazhyen were ...

Hey Venmaria! Today, I am reviewing your beautiful poem!! First of all, I think it is worth mentioning that you managed to personify the guard dog beautifully. I was not ...

Hello moon! Today I am going to be doing a review of your beautiful poem! I really liked how you related the sky's conditions and how it portrayed the narrators ...

Hi Ada, I will be reviewing your lovely poem for you today. I really liked your portrayal of change as something gradual and not necessarily dramatic. The beginning definitely hooked ...

Hey! Lavvie, I have to say that I really loved getting to know your main character in this first chapter! She has such a distinct blend of teenage sarcasm, boredom, ...