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  • Short Story » General, General Re: time

    Hello, hope all is well. Here's my review. First, I have to say, this was a very interesting read. I enjoyed this so much. This left me with a feeling ...

    Oct 19
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Just Like I Am

    Hello, hope all is well. Here is my review. From first glance, this is a short simple poem. I like that every two lines, you start with the same words ...

    Sep 8
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Wondering wistfully

    Hello, hope all is well. Here's my review. This was enjoyable to read. I like the similarities you made love to honey. And not just the liquid gold we know. ...

    Sep 8
  • Poetry » Health, Narrative Re: STAINED

    Hello, hope all is well. Here's my review. This definitely captured the feeling of grief, loss and guilt. I love the way you worded the first stanza. "How beautiful you ...

    Sep 7
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: My Crazy Ass Cat

    Hello, hope all is well. Here is my review. I love this lol It's so relatable because I grew up with cats and remember how nasty it was for one ...

    Sep 7
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Home ¿

    Hello, hope all is well. Here for a review. First off, I enjoy the way you wrote this poem. From the first to the second stanza, you differentiate the moods ...

    Jun 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Why go home

    Hello, hope all is well. Here for a review. Wow. First let me say that this is an emotionally raw poem. You can feel the pain. You can feel the ...

    Jun 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Questioning

    Hello, hope all is well. Here for a review First, I wanna say that I appreciate you taking the time to write this piece as I'm sure it means a ...

    Jun 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Two-faced

    Hello, hope all is well. Here with a review and should I say, I truly enjoyed this poem The distinct comparisons between the personalities were described very well. I loved ...

    Jun 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Spectators

    Hey, hope all is well. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. The imagery you used to describe the setting is very nice. I can feel how hot the weather is. A ...

    Jun 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: i've gotten worse // since we last spoke

    Hey, Lele here for a review Just wanted to say that this was good piece. It felt more like a conversation than a poem. It’s good. Feels natural, doesn’t feel ...

    Dec 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Candle Melting

    Hey, Lele here to review Just wanted to start by saying this is a beautiful poem I love the imagery, simple but effective. The mirrored perspectives of young and old ...

    Dec 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Victory, mine

    Hey, Lele here for a review Just want to start by saying this is categorized in the wrong section Moments like these are far from dramatic. And I feel for ...

    Dec 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Curiosity

    Hey, Lele here for a review Just wanted to start by saying this was a fun poem to read. Quirky and funny. It feels like a story book narrator were ...

    Dec 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Her everything

    Hey, Lele here to review Just wanted to start by saying this was a good poem Because of how you prefaced with the disclaimer, it gave a different perspective of ...

    Dec 7, 2021


You can cut all the flowers, but you cannot stop Spring from coming.
— Pablo Neruda